So this week we have to convert our 4*4 illustration into 8*8, and we have to work on the gaps which we discussed. So the things on which I have to work is that they are too literal to communicate what is there in the book, but the text is not that literal. It’s like a dream which Calvino tried to portray in his lines. And they were too rough to communicate because of that roughness; there were some elements that were not coming out as I wanted to, or as I imagined. So I made some changes in the Argia to make it more descriptive in its visual language. I collaborated the elements of three illustrations into one. I also used ink and microns, to change the weight of the stroke to show flow and hierarchy in components.
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